Says dumb
Even if the aliens used a compatible signal, the idea that a laptop could write code for their ship in a few minutes is a leap. The film does not respect its audience here.
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On How did a Mac laptop upload a virus to an alien mothership? in Independence Day
Says dumb
Even if the aliens used a compatible signal, the idea that a laptop could write code for their ship in a few minutes is a leap. The film does not respect its audience here.
On Could Watney really fly through space with a pierced glove? in The Martian
Says explained
The idea works in principle, and the film does not pretend it is easy. The amount of thrust is exaggerated.
The Dark Knight Rises (2012)
How does a fusion reactor turn into a bomb in The Dark Knight Rises?Cut the line about months. Say the core is unstable and the timer is whatever Bane decides.
Prometheus (2012)
How could Shaw run around after an emergency surgery?Have the pod only numb her and close the wound. She holds her side during every later scene and is visibly slower.
Interstellar (2014)
Why is the dialogue in Interstellar hard to hear?Lower the score by a few decibels during dialogue-heavy scenes. The music keeps its impact and the lines stay clear.
Prometheus (2012)
Why did David put the black liquid in Holloway's drink?David asks Weyland over comms, 'Shall I proceed with the test?' and the audience hears the reply.
The Dark Knight Rises (2012)
How did Bruce Wayne get from the prison back to Gotham so quickly?Bruce is already in Gotham when the pit is revealed to be an underground facility. No transcontinental escape is needed.
Prometheus (2012)
How did the geologist get lost in a structure he had mapped?Fifield says his probes lost signal after the storm hit, so he cannot trust the map until the signal returns.
The Dark Knight Rises (2012)
How did Bruce recover from a broken back so quickly?Show a brace made from scrap and a title card, 'Three months later,' before Bruce makes the climb.
The Dark Knight Rises (2012)
Why is Bane's dialogue so hard to hear?Keep the mask but mix his voice louder and clearer, with a deep echo, so the menace stays and the lines can be heard.
Prometheus (2012)
Why did Holloway take his helmet off on an alien planet?Make it a sealed viewing port instead: Holloway presses his face to the glass and says he cannot wait any longer.
Then the later infection plot loses its trigger.
Armageddon (1998)
Why did NASA train oil drillers instead of sending astronauts?Pair each driller with an astronaut who has two weeks of drilling training. The film keeps its cast and it makes sense.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
How did Rey and Kylo pass objects through the Force bond?Show a small object pass between Rey and Kylo during a previous bond scene, so the later use is an escalation.
The Dark Knight Rises (2012)
How did Blake know that Bruce Wayne was Batman?Show Blake at the youth home noticing Bruce's reaction to a news story about Batman. The later reveal builds on it.
Armageddon (1998)
Why did NASA only discover the asteroid with 18 days left?Add a scene where an astronomer says a funding cut shut down the survey that would have found it. The film then has a villain.
Interstellar (2014)
Why did Dr. Mann fake the data from his planet?Show a flicker of doubt in his early video log, one line that gives the audience a clue before the reveal.
Interstellar (2014)
Why did Professor Brand lie about Plan A?In his first scene, let Brand hesitate when Cooper asks if the equation is finished. The lie then has a visible crack.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
How did Arya reach the Night King without being noticed?Earlier in the episode, show Arya slipping past two wights in the corridors. The audience sees her do it before she does it to the Night King.
Armageddon (1998)
Why did the remote detonator fail?Have Truman warn that the remote link is unreliable at that distance and the crew must prepare a manual trigger.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
Why was Chewbacca's apparent death reversed so quickly?Keep Chewbacca off the transport, and show Rey's guilt in the next scene. She can focus on her own fear, not on a death.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why was Bran chosen as king of the Six Kingdoms?In E5, have two lords notice that Bran saw everything coming and did nothing. The Dragonpit vote then has a small argument to answer.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
Why does Rey heal Kylo's wound with the Force?After the healing, Rey sways on her feet. The cost is visible, and a line from Leia's voice says 'It takes something from you.'
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why did Jaime leave Brienne and return to Cersei?Brienne says 'You are not who she thinks you are.' Jaime answers 'I am exactly who she thinks I am.'
Jurassic Park (1993)
Why did Dennis Nedry shut down the whole park's security to steal the embryos?Nedry says the fences run on a separate circuit, so the shutdown only affects the doors. The storm then takes the fences down.
The Walking Dead: Season 1 (2010)
Why did Rick ride a horse into Atlanta?Rick takes the patrol car as far as the city's edge, then goes in on foot. The horse survives and so does the first set piece.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
Why was Rey revealed to be Palpatine's granddaughter?Add a short scene of Rey seeing a vision of Palpatine's voice in the first film. The later reveal pays off an earlier hint.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
How was a fleet of Star Destroyers built in secret on Exegol?In The Last Jedi or the opening scenes, show cargo ships with no registry heading for the Unknown Regions. A small clue builds the fleet.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why did the Dothraki charge the Army of the Dead at night?Keep the cavalry behind the castle walls until the dead are close, then have them ride out in a flanking charge with torches.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why did the scorpions hit Rhaegal but miss other dragons?Show Euron's crew practicing on seagulls in E3, and Qyburn at the walls promising a better scorpion that will 'have to wait.'
Frozen (2013)
Why did the king and queen keep Elsa isolated instead of helping her learn control?The queen suggests teaching Elsa control with a tutor. The king says no one can be trusted with the secret. The gates still close.
Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (2019)
How did Palpatine come back in The Rise of Skywalker?Plant a message from Snoke or Luke in the prior film that mentions the Emperor's body was never found.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why did the Starks shelter civilians in the Winterfell crypts?Send the civilians to a fortified hall in the keep. The Night King has to break in through the castle instead.
Lost: Season 1 (2004)
Why did the survivors keep splitting up to explore the jungle?Jack sets a rule that nobody goes out alone, and the group's first big scare comes when somebody breaks it.
Interstellar (2014)
Why does Brand argue that love can guide the mission?Cut the line 'love is the one thing we're capable of perceiving that transcends dimensions of time and space.' Keep the rest of the speech.
Game of Thrones: Season 8 (2019)
Why did Daenerys burn King's Landing after the bells rang?Tyrion urges her to wait for the bells to stop. She hears the second set of bells begin and the fire starts after that.
Signs (2002)
Why did every one of Graham's family habits end up helping against the alien?Cut the glasses of water from the ending's setup. Keep Merrill's bat and the wife's last words. The ending is still tidy but less crowded.
The Dark Knight (2008)
How did the Joker rig a hospital with explosives without anyone noticing?Gordon says the hospital's renovation crew was a Joker front, so the explosives were in the walls for weeks.
Friends: Season 1 (1994)
Why do the six friends spend working hours in a coffee shop?Add a line where Joey says he has an audition cancelled and Monica says the restaurant opens at noon. One line for the schedule.
Independence Day (1996)
How did a Mac laptop upload a virus to an alien mothership?David says the ship's systems use a signal he has already decoded, and the laptop only has to send it back in the right order.
Titanic (1997)
Why didn't Jack climb onto the door with Rose?Jack takes off a cork life jacket and slides it under the door so it floats higher. He still goes under the cold water, but Rose lives.